100wc#23

My goal this week is to write as if I was the main character.

I was in armed guard truck with all the cash I imagined what it would be like to have all I could see but to steal would be wrong. I know if you steal you can be fine or sentence to time in prison. I kept thinking about the all the cash I would be rich and I wouldn’t have to do this job I want to be a head of a big company like apple or westpac. I’d happy and earning lots. I really wanted that money I needed it but had to hold back. It wasn’t right to steal.

One Response

  1. roy says:

    I really liked your goal it is probably going to be one of mine.
    Even though you are the main character I don’t think you need all the I’s everywhere.
    I liked how you have all the short sentences.

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