My goal was to make the reader not have 100% knowledge of what was going on.

I was ready I knew I could totally could do this I definitely could win this race so I stepped up to the starting block then the guy shoot the pistol I dived into the water it began to turn green I tryd to swim but it pulled me back then it stopped my arms and legs moving I was drowning I tried to move but I still couldn’t, so I sank to the bottom of the now yellowish green pool I saw my competitors going down my last words in the pool were “what happened”.

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