My goal is to make the reader figure out what happen.

I’m just about to complete the longest walk of all time as walk the final steps I feel so overwhelmed and ready to fall down and collapse what is happening I’m actually falling over this isn’t meant to happen I’m falling there was nothing that could get me down not even the end of the world would stop me what is going on. I have something to eat every four hours and I and this bag full of water with a tube for me to drink through I should be fine but now I’m in a hospital bed and I have been here for three days without knowing.

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