I need to settle this no one else will. I hide in a nearby rock formation, and waited. It was long dark and one of the men walked from the denseness of the forest out to the clearing. I hears it that some mumble of words some secret language. I knew one thing I had to follow them and then I would find out. They walked and walked. Until a small cave they whispered to the door and a huge hole appeared and stair case. I went to see and then the moon behind me a shadow was lurking above me and wasn’t mine.

One Response

  1. Molly says:

    Hey, good story. I just have a couple of points, always read your work out loud in the future to avoid small mistakes.
    – hid not hide
    – I heard it mumble

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